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**I enjoy learning how to use new technology. As soon as something new comes out in stores I go and buy it. Without using the instructions manual, I learn little by little how everything works. Since I am a very curious person I sit in my room with a screw driver and I take gadgets apart by every little piece. Considering the fact that I am horrible at putting things back together I try very hard to. Since I made good grades in school my mom bought me a play station portable last summer of course I wanted to know how it reads the memory card and how the games work so I took it apart. There were some interesting things in the inside that I had no idea where they went or how the maker of this play station got them to work together. Until this day the way this play station was put together still remains anonymous.**
 * Enthusiasm Essay**

Second sentence - SC IC Fourth sentence "Since I ..." -- SC IC cc IC Since I made good grades -- should be Because I made good... this sentence also has SC IC You need a period after summer and a comma after course anonymous is not the best word. Mystery would be better.


 * || High school || Post secondary || college ||
 * Job || Cashier || Barbering || Real Estate Sales Agent ||
 * What they do || Receives payments, issues receipts, handles credit transactions, accounts for the amounts received, and perform duties in a wide variety of business establishments. || Provides customers with barbering services, including cutting, trimming, shampooing, and styling hair. May sell cosmetic supplies. || Rents, buys, and sells property to clients. Studies property listings, interviews clients, appoints clients to property sites, discusses conditions of sale, and draws up real estate contracts. ||
 * Working condition || Issues receipts, refunds, credits or change to customer. Greets customers. || You might do a lot of walking or you might sit but use your arms and legs to control machines, equipment or tools || You might do a lot of walking or standing, or you might sit but use your arms and legs to control machines, equipment or tools. ||
 * skills || Active listening, speaking, critical thinking, learning strategies || Active listening, speaking, active learning || Reading comprehension, active listening, writing, speaking , Mathematics, Critical thinking, Active learning, learning, Monitoring ||
 * money || $7.24hr 20,259 a year || $12.75hr or $26,610 a year || $24.44hr or $50,835 a year ||
 * outlook || Growth is estimated at 4% || Growth is estimated to be 1% || Growth is estimated to be 10% ||
 * conclusion || This job is where I stand but not for long. I plan on doing something different after high school || Something I have been interested in since middle school. Something I would do for fun. Always liked to cut hair || I have family members in this type of business; it’s been fun to see how they work. They have taught me many things ||